My OpInIoN`S

“The Three Gorges Dam”    

WOW! You have a really creative and informative page. Love your pictures because it catches reader’s attention. The banana phone is really funny. Maybe that will be the next popular thing. The links where you got the information from is a very helpful tool. I like that you have multiple information. Such as science, some history, and important people.  It’s like a one stop information page. Your writing is excellent as well, big words and great opinions.     

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4 Responses to “My OpInIoN`S”

  1.   Danielle Cacho Says:
    May 16th, 2006 at 2:18 pm

    In my opinion you need to know what your talking about I mean who is “you” that you keep on repeating.. Plus, this is for a grade why are you commenting about some banana phone that barely has to do with the information from the blog you were suppose to comment about what they said if it waz interesting or whatever not there pictures. Also, I believe you need more descriptive details.

  2.   Ms. F Says:
    May 16th, 2006 at 4:22 pm

    Cathleen - you didn’t follow the assignment as it was written. You were supposed to write one response that took all the blogs you read into account. Your response was not meant to be directed at any one blog in particular.

  3.   Room 613 Student Blogs » We’ve Been Reviewed! Thank You Room 140! Says:
    June 5th, 2006 at 5:18 pm

    […] WOW! You have a really creative and informative page. Love your pictures because it catches reader’s attention. The banana phone is really funny. Maybe that will be the next popular thing. The links where you got the information from is a very helpful tool. I like that you have multiple information. Such as science, some history, and important people. It’s like a one stop information page. Your writing is excellent as well, big words and great opinions. […]

  4.   SaraH Says:
    June 5th, 2006 at 10:06 pm

    Hello Cathleen!
    Thanks for using my Banana Phone post as an example!
    Too bad the post didnt seem to come out to good with the
    teacher and a classmate.
    Just want you to know that I liked the post very much but
    I do agree you should state who “you” is.
    Good luck on your next post.
    I’m sure you’ll do better!
    SaraH.